Sonnet 'Memory' Poem by Jahan Zeb

beautifully written well describes your thought................true love tale and desire................

oh! how lovely...a love sonnet with deep and true born emotions...a pure joy to read thank you for sharing sir, i love it love payal

Ahh, what a talent! : }

lying here :) ing. what SIBLIME DEVINE feeling with which you wrote!

when the glass is broken, the wine becomes sweeter!

A beautiful poem, liked the lines I have a hope you will be mine and mine you are, Like the moon accompanied by the brightest star,

beautiful sonnet very nice

I have a hope you will be mine and mine you are, Like the moon accompanied by the brightest star.. Very nice poem. I like it's intensity

Step by step the longing for the beloved gathers momentum, the intensity grows and finally the longing ends. Nice flow

'tis an excellent poem! ! ! ! ! good work! ! ! Keep on writing! ! ! ! !