Jahan zaib

Rookie - 94 Points (February 05,1981 / Malakand Pakistan)

Sonnet B - Poem by Jahan zaib

Calm and golden, are eyes and mind
All my moments, are full of hope
In thine loving eyes, love I find
Oh! Without you, I will grope

Leave me not, next to me stay
Go not away, hold my hand
I plead thee God, thee I pray
Let her with me in all moments stay

Blessed are nights, blessed are days
Feel I thee, in every full moon
She never leaves, forever she stays
A hundred years stay, is way too soon

Having you with me, a time divine
Each day each night, a cloud nine


Comments about Sonnet B by Jahan zaib

  • Veteran Poet - 1,276 Points Shahzia Batool (3/13/2013 9:56:00 AM)

    an attempt to preserve the moments...no past and future tense apply here, time doesn't pass, it is eternal present there... (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 4,024 Points Valerie Dohren (3/6/2013 4:49:00 PM)

    Very romantic sonnet - some lovely thoughts in there. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,353 Points Unwritten Soul (3/6/2013 9:29:00 AM)

    If we may shoot golden moon to be in your arms but the joy never same if you get the one who loyal and do love you in every breathe in his/her life...that is special thing about true souls_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,284 Points Tarobinson1103@gmail.com Robinson (3/4/2013 11:37:00 PM)

    It is a gift to be treasured not one to possess.
    Love flourishes in a garden of freedom of trust.
    Not as a harvest that you've crushed.
    Who possess the the mountains...no one yet they are magnificent.
    Should not your love be granted the same...so she can be magnificent. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 36,896 Points Gajanan Mishra (3/4/2013 9:05:00 AM)

    Having you with me a time divine. thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 75 Points Alexander Coppedge (3/4/2013 8:43:00 AM)

    Beautiful array of ideals (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, March 4, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, March 4, 2013


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