A Question After The Incident Poem by Jahan Zeb

A Question After The Incident

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Standing beside an open window,
Peeped into an empty room,
A dog I saw, aware awaken,
Hungry it looked,
The door banged open, a child entered,
In hands something like food,
Walked in front of the hungry dog,
Walked until reached to window,
He smiled at me,
A sharp turn he took, at me did he look,
I cried standing there, he would not hear,
Went out close the door behind,
Why did the dog not bark? Why did it not notice?
If not the child, at least the smell of food?
Was the dog blind or the child invisible?

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I think the child was a spirit
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adheez Van Der Beanthz 27 July 2013

mysterious poem with good image questions at the end of the reading makes us think more deeply I love it, thanks for sharing

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Kanav Justa 04 November 2013

... you created a beautiful mystery with this poem... loved it

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 06 September 2013

Oh wow a mysterious poem pennd in a super fine way! But nice if d dog dint hurt d child. Pls do review my latest, a gambling poem.

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Farah Ilyas 24 August 2013

mysterious poem. spirits remains with u, sometimes in short form, sometimes at highest peak but not vanishes anytime, u just need to awaken it up.

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Payal Parande 11 August 2013

hmm..indeed a mystery, only you have ability to create such story... a great one sir

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Unwritten Soul 28 July 2013

Animal also has an instinct...sometimes better than some people _Soul

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Malakand Pakistan
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