Jahan zaib

Rookie - 55 Points (February 05,1981 / Malakand Pakistan)

A Soul’s Cry


Never was I in such dismay
A lost soul
Who knows not the body he’s in
Wandering far and wide
Without destination,
Lost, lost, completely lost
Yet living in millions
Empty am I,
Motionless my heart
Nerves feel not
The pain anywhere in me
Pain in my heart is such
Noisy
Echoes of your name rising up and up
Unaware is my heart
Of its own beats
Lost it has lost
Its rhythm and music
Once it had.
Will peace come again
To my heart?
Will my eyes be ever dry?
My peace dwells in your eyes
Bring it.
Bring it back to me
In your eyes.
I wish not gold
I wish not wealth
Let my soul be mingled with yours
It lives only
When you are with it.
Be mine
Complete me
Make my wandering
A pleasing walk.

Submitted: Saturday, July 06, 2013
Edited: Saturday, July 06, 2013

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Comments about this poem (A Soul’s Cry by Jahan zaib )

  • Rookie - 415 Points Yasmeen Khan (10/19/2013 2:36:00 PM)

    a lost soul in search of its destination, a cry from the heart! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,147 Points Thomas A Robinson (8/1/2013 7:59:00 PM)

    A warm wind embrases you
    a souls breath kisses you
    Take all too fast before it turns and leaves
    Love has never abandoned you and will always be in you
    With you always, and always.
    Dry your tears , let love fill your heart
    Your suffering, I feel your pain
    But it is time you will live again.
    Love is a temporal rose on this years vine
    It is yours to unwind (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 603 Points Shahzia Batool (7/7/2013 8:56:00 AM)

    tears are the ink here...a complete poem without any odors and essences artificial! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,022 Points Unwritten Soul (7/6/2013 9:02:00 AM)

    Heartfelt....i do cry sometimes, and left me better..i am not weak, well if i am weak i am okay with it..because i am a human with feelings and emotion...i will share lot in every drop of my tears. You have started it and only you can ended it...and pain it is real but do we ready for next thing..Oh God lead us somewhere you think it best_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Thungem Lam (7/6/2013 8:19:00 AM)

    Waoh! So amazed. I enjoy so much in reading your poem, it is wonderful. Read my poem and comment me. (Report) Reply

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