A Thought Poem by Jahan Zeb
A Thought
A THOUGHT
Should I tell you of a dreadful thought,
That makes me breathless, sobbing and crying,
Without her love my life's a knot,
Without me she's a paper flying,
She wept for all my pains, felt my gloom,
Did not sleep when I was away,
The thought that comes to my mind mom!
Will I weep for you or YOU will mourn me?
Jahan….
thanks for the lines Jahan, the poem is short, sweet and rhyming....
The thought that comes to my mind mom! Will I weep for you or YOU will mourn me? these lines have dreadful sorrow inside, May ALLAH blessed u & ur mother with a lot of blessing indeed
You have expressed great sorrow in your poems. Your imagery along with words is praiseworthy.Your last two lines have poured down such great pain of your heart. May Allah bless you with lots of joy!
A fantastic poem, the love between mother and son is a strong bond. A great write.
sometimes i too think the same, , , , and yes its really a very dreadful thought, , , , you have penned it down so perfectly, , , fabulous write, , ,
A good solid poem. These emotions i have more often than not. Well done Jahan!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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well written poem dedicated to a mother-thank you for sharing