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(February 05,1981 / Malakand Pakistan)

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A THOUGHT

A THOUGHT
Should I tell you of a dreadful thought,
That makes me breathless, sobbing and crying,
Without her love my life's a knot,
Without me she's a paper flying,
She wept for all my pains, felt my gloom,
Did not sleep when I was away,
The thought that comes to my mind mom!
Will I weep for you or YOU will mourn me?

Jahan….

Submitted: Sunday, June 03, 2012


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  • Heather Wilkins (10/9/2013 8:48:00 PM)

    a good poem about mom. good ink

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  • Heather Wilkins (10/9/2013 8:48:00 PM)

    a good poem about mom. good ink

  • Heather Wilkins (10/9/2013 8:48:00 PM)

    a good poem about mom. good ink

  • Kanav Justa (12/24/2012 3:33:00 AM)

    sometimes i too think the same, , , , and yes its really a very dreadful thought, , , , you have penned it down so perfectly, , , fabulous write, , ,

  • * Sunprincess * (11/15/2012 9:43:00 PM)

    oh jahan..i would not wish any mother to mourn her child..just today a lady told me her son passed away the 2nd of this month...she said there is nothing worse than losing your child..i felt sorrow for her but at least she still has her grandson..thanks for sharing this one.

  • Heyyou Boy (10/31/2012 11:55:00 AM)

    A good solid poem. These emotions i have more often than not. Well done Jahan!

  • Stevie Taite (10/18/2012 10:36:00 AM)

    I am sorry but I get from this that you are not close to your mum. You have found this love you need from somewhere/someone else and feel guilty that you do not feel such depth of love for your mum. I could be totally wrong but thats how it reads to me.

  • Pink Pixie (9/26/2012 10:10:00 PM)

    Wow, that's powerful. Lots of emotion and expression, I enjoyed it.

  • Yoonoos Peerbocus (8/21/2012 5:30:00 AM)

    eternal truth revisited-

  • Saadat Tahir (7/20/2012 6:42:00 PM)

    nice lines celebrating the institution of motherhood....
    i guess almost all poets have delved into the subject......of course me too...

    The lines are almost religious intense and entrenched, the magic is when ever one reads such lines they seem to catch on and embed in ones psyche....
    this is more specific....a mother and a son.....nostalgia and projection create a powerful mix...and takes you to a thumb sucking aba daba gooo gooo stage..
    very nice loved reading it

    cheers
    :)

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