(27 November 1967 / Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh)

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A Fish In The Sea Of Tears

O baby you have made me insult-proof
Though if you are a home I am your roof!

Now you can insult me as much as you wish
I live in the sea of tears as if a fish!

Now you can forget me but I will love you always
I will do my level best to see smile on your face!

Now you can avoid me if I come closer
It doesn’t matter if I become loser!

Submitted: Tuesday, September 27, 2011
Edited: Wednesday, September 28, 2011


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  • Rishi Kaashyap (12/22/2012 7:05:00 AM)

    Love the message it conveys...
    Keep Writing :)

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  • ~~ Lyda ~~ (11/23/2012 10:39:00 AM)

    No one with such a great imagination is loser. I love this poem!

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  • Roongratt Srimanchantha (10/28/2012 5:22:00 AM)

    wow..can't imagine anyone so sweet ;)

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  • Sarojini Pattayat (10/14/2012 4:03:00 AM)

    nice poem. what made you to write this poem.

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  • Allemagne Roßmann (9/9/2012 9:58:00 AM)

    Written well with flair......khub bhalo laglo pore

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  • ishant Bhurani (2/13/2012 4:48:00 AM)

    Really, well written...

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  • Micmac Mccrory (2/7/2012 12:03:00 PM)

    love the title; a good write.

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  • Josephine Collett (2/7/2012 12:49:00 AM)

    I just love the title of this poem! Very nice imagery.

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  • Batool Abdulhafid (1/26/2012 4:19:00 PM)

    Nice! I like it though i dont wanna be a loser: P

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  • Sun And Moon (1/26/2012 7:23:00 AM)

    erm, thats a nice piece of poetry :)
    Keep it up

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