A Bed Of Thorn Poem by Asif Andalib

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh

A Bed Of Thorn

Rating: 4.3


Baby my life is like a bed of thorn
If I had a choice I would not be born.

Oh my love is like a bad heartache
It reminds me always what I lack.

Oh my eyes are like thirsty sand
No one gives me her tender hand.

Oh my nights are full of sleeplessness
Cause my everything is in a mess.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Farah Ilyas 08 April 2013

using few words, u described a lot about restlessness...brief & great poem...well done

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Bhavna Singh 26 November 2013

very very nice poetry...............i like it

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Mark Heathcote 08 October 2014

I like your poem nice one.63241

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 13 April 2015

Baby my life is like a bed of thorn If I had a choice I would not be born. Loved reading it.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 13 April 2015

Baby my life is like a bed of thorn If I had a choice I would not be born. loved reading it

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Narayanan Kutty Pozhath 29 April 2018

Shows the ultimate frustration of the poet. Beautiful lines explaining the state of mind.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 March 2018

A beautiful poem that echoes loneliness of the heart. A great piece and rhyme.

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Madhabi Banerjee 14 March 2018

a beautiful written piece. thanks for sharing

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 March 2018

A brilliant piece of poetry! Fabulous use of simile! I vote this beautiful poem with a 10

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Vipins Puthooran 18 December 2016

Such a wonderful poem /

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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