(27 November 1967 / Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh)

What do you think this poem is about?

A bed of thorn

Baby my life is like a bed of thorn
If I had a choice I would not be born.

Oh my love is like a bad heartache
It reminds me always what I lack.

Oh my eyes are like thirsty sand
No one gives me her tender hand.

Oh my nights are full of sleeplessness
Cause my everything is in a mess.

Submitted: Monday, September 26, 2011
Edited: Monday, October 31, 2011


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  • Farah Ilyas (4/8/2013 12:09:00 PM)

    using few words, u described a lot about restlessness...brief & great poem...well done

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  • Valsa George (12/28/2012 1:21:00 AM)

    It is a powerful write Andalif, but too melancholic in tone and spirit! ! Why don't you cast off your gloom and look for a New year of hope and cheer!

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  • Sanjay Mehta (12/26/2012 12:45:00 AM)

    Beautiful expression of thoughts, sorrow musically expressed.

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  • Derek J. Brandt (12/14/2012 11:43:00 PM)

    I have many poems written in these times of my life. They really are what make a man strong down the road. Cherish the creative energy that comes in times like these, and take out all of your pain in a constructive way.

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  • Dr Library @ Debadarshi (12/13/2012 1:40:00 AM)

    really sir... we all miss that tender hand/ vanishing hand at some points of time, , , , , am i wrong? ? ? ?

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  • Meena Mustafa (12/3/2012 3:42:00 PM)

    Beautiful! I can well relate to this one :)

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  • Angel Plant (11/22/2012 2:12:00 PM)

    Wow again amazing and beautiful. Your good. I love it and enjoyed it.

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  • Sangnam Nam (11/21/2012 6:25:00 PM)

    Bed of thorns....ohhhhhhh! Must hurt a lot!
    Are you OK?

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  • Sabit Ince (11/11/2012 7:51:00 AM)

    i like asif nice poems thank you

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  • Jaya Mishra (11/5/2012 10:54:00 AM)

    I like this asif....
    Beautiful write...

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