Poet of the River [Ms.] (july 27 1994 / California, but move around a lot.)

I've read the poems you have posted and have been awestruck to say; you should be in the Top 50 poets list.Fantastic writing.

A gifted young girl who can turn her emotional turmoil’s, into passionate verses that relay the confusion in a world of post adolescents yet simultaneously show signs of happiness and resiliency underneath the common burdens of existential angst prevalent for her age. In other words she has soul of a balanced writer, and if you want to understand a young women's mind look no further.

I can't make you grow, be old, feel the dark angels
of desperation... I can only say to you what is in me
from what you say to me...
You are becoming larger than you know
(I feel it in your verse)
keep growing... it's not talking
it's an answer to a dance
that they keep jiving.
love never ends...

Good job, thanks.
.... but believe that life is not how disappointing! ? you are 17, so who about a little laugh dude? what do you say?