Poet of the River

Rookie - 10 Points [Ms.] (july 27 1994 / California, but move around a lot.)

Comments about Poet of the River

  • Rookie - 27 Points Daniel Warner (4/1/2012 10:39:00 PM)

    I've read the poems you have posted and have been awestruck to say; you should be in the Top 50 poets list.Fantastic writing.

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  • Silver Star - 4,048 Points Kevin Patrick (3/30/2012 7:36:00 PM)

    A gifted young girl who can turn her emotional turmoil’s, into passionate verses that relay the confusion in a world of post adolescents yet simultaneously show signs of happiness and resiliency underneath the common burdens of existential angst prevalent for her age. In other words she has soul of a balanced writer, and if you want to understand a young women's mind look no further.

  • Rookie Jim Taylor (3/6/2012 5:49:00 PM)

    I can't make you grow, be old, feel the dark angels
    of desperation... I can only say to you what is in me
    from what you say to me...
    You are becoming larger than you know
    (I feel it in your verse)
    keep growing... it's not talking
    it's an answer to a dance
    that they keep jiving.
    love never ends...

  • Rookie Mehraneh Hosseini (1/17/2012 4:27:00 AM)

    Good job, thanks.
    .... but believe that life is not how disappointing! ? you are 17, so who about a little laugh dude? what do you say?

  • Rookie Bella Stylos (8/17/2011 10:45:00 AM)

    ds poem makes me want to reflect on my lyf.

  • Rookie Tanchanok Manokam (3/29/2011 9:36:00 PM)

    I like your poem ' love and lose ' This poem is sad. And it like me right now. Good Job.

Best Poem of Poet of the River

' A Path With No End ' (Thought)

They say life is a winding road with many paths to take.
But no matter how many paths I choose,
It's always a dead end,
I have to retrace my steps to find my mistake.
Only to find it's one I cannot mend.

It's like starting a race expecting to win,
But somehow you always loose.
When the race starts you don't know where to begin.
What path to choose.

But what happens when we get to the dead end?
Do we turn around and run away so we can try again?
Do we try to win a race with no end?
Or is the dead end ware our true journey begins?

Read the full of ' A Path With No End ' (Thought)

Love? (Thought)

is love real or is it a trick?

do people love or dream of love they know they will never have?
should love be a goal or a dream they fear to have because you know that when you wake up the dream is over and the feeling you felt were unjust.

is love a good thing or just a temporary indulgent.

like chocolate, sweet but in the end you know that sweet things are bad for you and you can't have them. you can only wish something as good will find you and save you from your pain.
or a rose

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