Jack Growden

Rookie - 259 Points (1997 / Townsville, Australia)

Yours


Yours is a mind hampered by query
And an outlook anxious and dire
Foreseen through aching eyes so weary.
You have conjured many a theory:
I have heard them all at some stage prior.

Yours is a conscience struggling to cope
And a heart that is suffering thus.
Once vivacious, boasting boundless hope;
Now plummeting down a foreign slope
Though you opt to paint it and not discuss.

Yours is a spirit devoid of charm
Yet you hide behind feeble defence.
Reciting one meek biblical psalm
Will not rid you of a single qualm,
And your hollow words are impotent hence.

Yours is a case which one can suppress
Though it is a weak man who ignores
That there are problems he must address.
So rescind your false act and confess,
Then conquer these meddlesome woes of yours.

Submitted: Saturday, January 11, 2014
Edited: Monday, January 13, 2014

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  • Rookie - 259 Points Jack Growden (1/21/2014 3:34:00 PM)

    I'm glad Lyn. Thanks again for reading! And Mike I always appreciate your feedback. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 482 Points Mike Barrett (1/19/2014 10:29:00 AM)

    Jack, well done. On the road to self and God realization Soul is tested again and again. Easier to face and learn the lessons in a current lifetime, but little matter, if not learned in a current lifetime they can still be learned in the next, or the next or the next - ad infinitum. Cheers! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 5,309 Points Lyn Paul (1/18/2014 7:38:00 AM)

    Your heart is talking and I like it. Thank you for asking me to read your words... you asked with such clever words this time... could not refuse. (Report) Reply

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