Aufie Zophy

Bronze Star - 2,344 Points (18 October 1964)

Y/. New Me Poem by Aufie Zophy


An almost perfect silence embraces
a whispering fountain of sparks
illuminating my inner thoughts

An almost perfect silence envelops
pepper of love that’s being sprinkled
on the plainness of my hungry ego

A perfect silence
of light and love
A new me emerges

Submitted: Friday, March 14, 2014
Edited: Friday, March 14, 2014

Topic of this poem: silence


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On the renewing energy of silence

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  • Gold Star - 8,472 Points Daniel Brick (5/25/2014 4:08:00 PM)

    Silence can be boring or exhilarating, it can be terrifying or illuminating. Thanks to your poem our minds can contemplate only its positive aspects safely and freely. You wrote this poem in March, which in my part of the world includes the beginning of spring. I mention that because this is the epitome of a SPRING POEM. It signals a new season for the heart and mind with quiet hope. It's not exaggerating the possibilities, just reminding us that the silence within us holds hope for those who seek it. This poem is truly a gift to your readers, a kind of parallel to the gifts to others you found in my ONE TRUE DREAM. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 138 Points Spiritual Seeker (4/10/2014 9:14:00 PM)

    Yes, it is in silence..that we discover the gem in us, the hidden spark and often the wisdom in happenings!
    Lov your poem sufi bro! 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 118 Points Yash Shinde (4/8/2014 11:26:00 PM)

    ............Silence helps us accumulate power.............
    A perfect silence
    of light and love
    A new me emerges....the most beautiful lines of this write......... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 287 Points Joseph Anderson (3/15/2014 1:09:00 PM)

    A free verse rendition that gets to the very essence of our being. Brief and revealing- An
    excellant write with metaphoric mysteries (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,193 Points Valerie Dohren (3/15/2014 5:53:00 AM)

    We are reborn in silence - lovely, thought-provoking write Aufie. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,141 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (3/14/2014 10:35:00 AM)

    A great poem in brill metaphor. Now i undrstand why yor name is Aufie zophie after the great arab astronomer. (Report) Reply

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