Y/. New Me Poem by Aufie Zophy

Y/. New Me

Rating: 5.0


An almost perfect silence
embraces my body, heart and soul

A whispering fountain of sparks
illuminates my inner thoughts

Herbs of love are sprinkled
on the plainness of my hungry ego

A perfect silence,
light and love
A new me emerges

Friday, March 14, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: silence
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
On the renewing energy of silence
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 14 March 2014

A great poem in brill metaphor. Now i undrstand why yor name is Aufie zophie after the great arab astronomer.

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Valerie Dohren 15 March 2014

We are reborn in silence - lovely, thought-provoking write Aufie.

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Terry Craddock 03 January 2017

every image is profoundly beautiful and exhilerating, blessing my day

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Daniel Brick 25 May 2014

Silence can be boring or exhilarating, it can be terrifying or illuminating. Thanks to your poem our minds can contemplate only its positive aspects safely and freely. You wrote this poem in March, which in my part of the world includes the beginning of spring. I mention that because this is the epitome of a SPRING POEM. It signals a new season for the heart and mind with quiet hope. It's not exaggerating the possibilities, just reminding us that the silence within us holds hope for those who seek it. This poem is truly a gift to your readers, a kind of parallel to the gifts to others you found in my ONE TRUE DREAM.

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Spiritual Seeker 10 April 2014

Yes, it is in silence..that we discover the gem in us, the hidden spark and often the wisdom in happenings! Lov your poem sufi bro! 10

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Yash Shinde 08 April 2014

............Silence helps us accumulate power............. A perfect silence of light and love A new me emerges....the most beautiful lines of this write.........

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Joseph Anderson 15 March 2014

A free verse rendition that gets to the very essence of our being. Brief and revealing- An excellant write with metaphoric mysteries

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