Intimate freedom?
So many people go on with the most intimate act
Shortly after they met, after the first contact
Lust and desire, need for pleasure, a gift a God
And then He forbids it, quite cruel! Or not?
Imagine your one-time girl experiences a pregnancy
After your very pleasant and happy intimacy
A child without father, the mother too young
Or illegitimate abortion, a feat causing guilt, often life-long
But now we have means to avoid such ills
We do have devices and wonderful pills
With proper protection, even HIV has no chance
So why not enjoy the pleasure of the intimate dance?
Still, my sons, please think of the size of the feeling
We generate in young girls through 'virginity stealing'
Every day, broken hearted people, driven to the brink
Are hopeless, overwhelmed by sadness, unable to think.
Some may say, no problem if both are fully aware
It is not love, just pleasure we share
What a huge mistake to think we are above
The power of nature, of falling in love.
Next time, just think, perhaps when too early intimacy would start,
You ‘ll be the one, ending up devastated, with a broken heart.
After you gave the best of yourself, you are dumped for another
Your feelings ignored, your love of your life, she couldn't bother
For yourself or the girl you desire, avoid this curse
Being dumped after love, nothing seems worse.
Intimate contact, still a present from God, super fine
As long as we reserve it for the very right time!
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Written in clear language for my two teenage sons
The rules of our Creator make so much sense!
Amen to what you put forth in this poem. Sadly, not to many heed these warnings. Well done, straight forward and right. so right. A worthy write
you hit the nail on the head, think about what you do before going to that bed. there may be a child that you conceive, when you turn around and leave.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Aufie Zophy! Beautiful poem 'Intimate Freedom'. Thanks for sharing here.