Y// Adoring, Ignoring Poem by Aufie Zophy

Y// Adoring, Ignoring

Rating: 2.8


While adoring
the million shades of green
in the coconut tree's crown,
basking in the midday sun,
against an azure blue sky,
I was ignoring
the magnificence of casuarinas
giving me a cooling shade,
whispering the sweet song
of the soft sea breeze,
that gently shook their leaves

Saturday, July 30, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharati Nayak 13 September 2016

A great work bringing paradox feelings together. We very often in awe of some one or some beauty at a distant and can not appreciate the beauty that lie around us. Thanks for sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 August 2016

Millions of sheds of green cherish here with interesting imagery and we witness wonderful expression of nature here. Beauty of blue sky and middy sun is very wonderful. Soft sea breeze gently whispers in our ears. Interesting poem this is...10

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