Winter Poem by SALINI NAIR

Winter

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Stillness pursues in each step
As a revamp of old boldness
Misty lane seems cringed as lone
Till the frozen yard of blows

Serenity steals gusts its way
As that passion warmth its loft
Mist speak all warmth in stripes
To relish the fumes of crazy winter

Rainbow stretches on heavens lap
Painted yard that sniff its warmth
Heavenly tract that loom a daze
To be a part of heavens bright

Rays is veiled in each start
Lucent than everyday tact
Frozen step slips on empty lane
To be in tempting hands of winter! ! !

©2015 SALINI.S.NAIR. All rights reserved.

Wednesday, January 7, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: winter
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 07 January 2015

Beautiful poem on winter. with many fantastic lines.. Rays is veiled in each start Lucent than everyday tact Frozen step slips on empty lane To be in tempting hands of winter! ! ! Loved it.

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Rajesh Thankappan 08 January 2015

You have portrayed a rich kaleidoscope of winter. An engaging poem nicely penned.

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Ramesh Rai 07 January 2015

I read other poems on winter but particularly your poem expresses different mood of winter. Nicely penned.

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Kee Thampi 17 January 2015

a lovely portrait of love of nature Rainbow stretches on heavens lap Painted yard that sniff its warmth Heavenly tract that loom a daze To be a part of heavens bright

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Akhtar Jawad 13 January 2015

Rays is veiled in each start Lucent than everyday tact Frozen step slips on empty lane To be in tempting hands of winter! ! ! Description of winter in specific style, it's a nice poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 January 2015

On heaven's lap rainbow stretches after reading such a beautifully penned poem. Strong imagery of this poem shines in each line and fills colour in mind like rain bow. Beautiful.

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Valsa George 11 January 2015

Winter is painted in all vividness and lucidity! Enjoyed!

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 10 January 2015

Very well penned with amazing lines on winter........very very outstanding......10

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