Drought! Poem by SALINI NAIR

Drought!

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Arms is active in each side
Fought for the myths of single past
To fix the belief with an extreme sigh
To nullify other with grin of arms

Other side is unstable this time
Flood of blood is in haste always
Aridness melts all shields of world
Rise of blood and sea is in tune

Sadness whisper in the depths of loss
Losses sparkle in the faded eyes
Aridness conquers all fertile parts
Stability is absent as never before

Turtle withdrew in to the lonely shell
Vagueness widen hands to the future
All lies is silent in that scene
The land was weeping with losses

There the sunshine was terrific
To burn the land with full lust inside
All beliefs will be silent that time
Realistic part that awaits all clods! ! ! !

©2015 SALINI.S.NAIR. All rights reserved.

Sunday, February 15, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: drought
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Preserve nature before fight for religion...as global warming is increasing after the battle there won't be any base….
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 15 February 2015

There is an internal and external drought in the world than never before! The world is heated up with rivalries and intolerance as the earth gets parched due to global warming! The rain of love and peace alone can restore life's fertility! A symbolic write!

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 15 February 2015

Very insightful and bears relevance to today's strife-infested world......Salini......amazing piece composed extraordinarily........10

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Akhtar Jawad 15 February 2015

The most ugly act on the part of humans is to fight for religion as the purpose of religion is to live and let others live.

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Sd Tiwari 23 July 2017

'losses sparkle in the faded eyes' this is fate of the draught. Very nice penning.

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Rajesh Thankappan 01 March 2015

The world is in disarray today and you have painted a good picture of this gloominess. Loved it.

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Kee Thampi 21 February 2015

Rise of blood and sea is in tune Sadness whisper in the depths of loss a magic of words Turtle withdrew in to the lonely shell Vagueness widen hands to the future how bold in this magical poem and spears it into my soul

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 February 2015

Groovy description.Deep feeling.Many thanks.

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Khalid Saifullah 15 February 2015

A thoughtful poem..........................................

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