At Least Poem by SALINI NAIR
At Least
Seems in an era of dryness
Hotness parched lives terribly
Planted a hope to spread its shade
Goodness that feed all with its thump
Variable part that seldom rule
There a threshold glimpse in fences
Detached land that seldom speak
Neighbor an invader in its style
Calmness that listens devils tongue
Overhaul time and trap own wings
Time was in haste as it is
One was feeding all its way
Sowed hatred spread its wings
Annihilation blended in sand
A poisonous part of life's ruin
Hatred sprouts as branchless tree
Heart vibrates in extreme terms
Air will be toxic and roam endless
Burn it on the yard and flee from there
For a peaceful tomorrow at least! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
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A beautiful optimistic poem, which comes from heart with sincerity of purpose.Well expressed.Well done Col Muhammad Khalid Khan
Hatred sprouts as branchless tree Heart vibrates in extreme terms Air will be toxic and roam endless Burn it on the yard and flee from there For a peaceful tomorrow at least! A nice poem, a hopeboosting write.
Seems in era of dryness still we hope for life to rejoice and feel. At least we should realize. Beautiful presentation.
Hatred sprouts as branch less tree! Yes, Hatred is manifest everywhere and in all actions of many a men! If it is allowed to grow unchecked, it will ruin the world! Let us flee from the danger zone of hatred and seek shelter in the bastions of peace! The craving for peace is powerfully expressed!
Time was in haste as it is One was feeding all its way Sowed hatred spread its wings Annihilation blended in sand love the true life to solitude....
for a peaceful tomorrow let us love our fellow man nice writing
Goodness is always good and dwells in other's heart too. Beautifully crafted and drafted poem specific to time but murder is the extreme of cruelty. Expression of sadness in nice poem.
Let us hope that the tree of hope branches out and provide shade to one and all, just contrast to the 'branch less tree, ' that you mention in the last stanza. Great writing.
poetess made a message to us Time was in haste as it is One was feeding all its way Sowed hatred spread its wings
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/17/2024 7:19:39 PM # 1.0.0.1119
for a peaceful tomorrow, thanks, good writing..