The evening sun shone its magic light
on the trees along the white sand shore
a superb scene, a pure delight,
an amazing sight, rarely seen before
My thoughts were filled with love
Feelings warm, affable and kind;
perhaps they came from high above;
filled my heart, flowing to my mind
In the middle of my lovely walk,
So many children playing in the sand
stopped their game to come and talk
we laughed and they became my friend
These children's love that came my way
Somehow, it made me understand
that what happens to us day by day
does on what we think and feel, depend
I love your poem and totally agree with your notes on your poem and know how true it is for us what we give out we get back....10
A lovely write- - - Our thought determines our behavior- - - - - Our inner emotions are reflected on our face- - Your thoughts were filled with love for children and so they were instantly attracted to you and made friends with you.- - - - -Thanks for sharing the beautiful poem.
The visuals within your poem are beautiful. and your words of wisdom in your poet's notes. very enjoyable read.. Annette
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
wonderful writing..... I love the Title and the last Verse........ Thanks for sharing! !