What We Think And Feel... Poem by Aufie Zophy

What We Think And Feel...

Rating: 5.0


The evening sun shone its magic light
on the trees along the white sand shore
a superb scene, a pure delight,
an amazing sight, rarely seen before

My thoughts were filled with love
Feelings warm, affable and kind;
perhaps they came from high above;
filled my heart, flowing to my mind

In the middle of my lovely walk,
So many children playing in the sand
stopped their game to come and talk
we laughed and they became my friend

These children's love that came my way
Somehow, it made me understand
that what happens to us day by day
does on what we think and feel, depend

Saturday, January 14, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty,feelings,love,thoughts
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
What we feel inside,
how we think
determines how we walk,
how we talk, how we behave
and as such determines what happens to us
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ryson Dsouza 19 January 2017

wonderful writing..... I love the Title and the last Verse........ Thanks for sharing! !

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Simone Inez Harriman 19 January 2017

I love your poem and totally agree with your notes on your poem and know how true it is for us what we give out we get back....10

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Bharati Nayak 18 January 2017

A lovely write- - - Our thought determines our behavior- - - - - Our inner emotions are reflected on our face- - Your thoughts were filled with love for children and so they were instantly attracted to you and made friends with you.- - - - -Thanks for sharing the beautiful poem.

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Annette Aitken 17 January 2017

The visuals within your poem are beautiful. and your words of wisdom in your poet's notes. very enjoyable read.. Annette

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Pancham Vinay 14 January 2017

Well written

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