(17/9/1993 / cairo, Egypt)

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Two Souls Inside

I have two souls inside..
Soul living on you
And soul living to continue
Soul seeing with you..
The life in special view
And soul live and learn
To accept someone new
Soul keeping its love
And soul making the impossible to laugh
TWO souls their aims are odds
Their roots from different spots
Soul havin' answers for questions..
And soul do nothin' but leavin' dots...
I have 2 souls inside..
Soul planning to have new life
And soul won't stay alive

Submitted: Wednesday, January 09, 2013

Poet's Notes about The Poem

its about Internal conflict, , when you feel that you between two Contradictions and you can't choose your way...
when you don't know which you can listen to.. your heart, or your mind

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  • Aya Nasr (1/11/2013 2:33:00 PM)

    it happened 3 years ago
    and the soul who trying to start new life with new person somehow won
    and the soul who won't stay alive kinda disappeared or you can say in idle
    but, Conflict still exists, , situations and events happened makes the broken soul breathing again but still in idle as it will be alive in the perfect time, , i guess i'll spend long time in this fight :)
    thank you alot tiegan for your comment and question :)

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  • Titi Dale (1/10/2013 11:03:00 PM)

    Wow, what a fight you have going here! When this happens to you, which one wins?
    Favorite lines:

    TWO souls their aims are odds
    Their roots from different spots

    Keep writing poetry like this, and I will keep reading!

    Tiegan

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