Aya Nasr

Rookie - 11 Points (17/9/1993 / cairo, Egypt)

Speechless!


I have something to confess
I see myself in a big mess
My heart got lost and can't find its address
I loved him and his reaction was meaningless
He persuaded me that he is feelingless
So I did nothing but being speechless
I'm not happy nor sad but guess!
I crossed the meaning of sadness
...
You became my hardest experiences
I got that I loved an object with no senses
But in figure of human with organs and lenses
....
You can't imagine the strength of weakness
When it beat me and destroy my heart's fitness
And I do nothing but being speechless

Submitted: Thursday, January 10, 2013
Edited: Thursday, June 27, 2013

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  • Freshman - 2,225 Points Patricia Grantham (8/24/2013 3:41:00 PM)

    A lost and saddened heart can be found and made happy again.Yes we
    are at a lost for words when someone breaks our heart. Love will come
    again and will be better. Very touching. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 32 Points Abdallah Gamal (8/24/2013 4:52:00 AM)

    Speechless! That what I feel now, it's a real piece of art, each color in this poem was chosen accurately, Keep the good work, and keep impressing us :) 10+ (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,585 Points Sallam Yassin (5/28/2013 8:03:00 AM)

    Yes i believe and you believe too in love
    may he makes us weak in way
    but
    he makes us feel and sense
    life and that is speechless
    well done I love it thanks (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Jac Harper (2/25/2013 7:57:00 PM)

    I believe that I have felt like this at certain (difficult) times in my life. Nicely expressed :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 11 Points Aya Nasr (2/14/2013 7:52:00 AM)

    mohammaed: that's the point.. : D thank you for your advice the last time i read English poem from 5: 6 years ago: D

    thank you all [3 [3 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,268 Points Mohammad Skati (2/4/2013 12:43:00 PM)

    HI, AYA.IT'S A NICE POEM, BUT I LIKE TO PAY YOUR ATTENTION THAT WHEN YOU WRITE POETRY IN ENGLISH TRY TO FORGET YOUR MOTHER LANGUAGE AND TRY TO BE LIKE THE ENGLISH PEOPLE. I THINK ENGLISH WHEN I WRITE ENGLISH.THANKS. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 752 Points Tony Karas (1/15/2013 3:47:00 AM)

    Extremely well done. (((hug))) . Dunno why but nothing ever takes my ratings... I gave it a 10. (Report) Reply

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