(17/9/1993 / cairo, Egypt)

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Rude & Jealousy

Being rude is cause of my jealousy
When you burn me inside with no mercy
When I see you attracted to her like she's sexy
And in fact everything on her so stinky
Yes I'm rude and I don't care about your blames

Cause you hurt my feelings and playing games
And youre the one who makes flames
Yes its hard when I let you sleep with your sadness
But what shall I do when you wakeup my madness
Yes I'm kind but don't let that make you blind
Cause I still remember the scars you left behind
I will not forgive easily I'm not that kind
So wakeup and refresh your mind
Maybe I'm a close friend to my weakness
But I really appreciate how precious is the forgivness

Submitted: Thursday, January 10, 2013
Edited: Friday, January 11, 2013

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  • Tony Karas (1/15/2013 3:48:00 AM)

    Another one... I feel your pain. (((hug)))

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  • Aya Nasr (1/13/2013 2:57:00 PM)

    thank you alot :) -flowers-

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  • Mohammad Muzzammil (1/13/2013 12:03:00 AM)

    Very nicely expressed your emotions with wit and heart. The last two lines of your poem is praiseworthy:
    Maybe I'm a close friend to my weakness
    But I really appreciate how precious is the forgiveness

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