The Summer Before High School...[ Short; Dedicated To P H Poet, "Fog Runner' ] Poem by Bri Edwards

The Summer Before High School...[ Short; Dedicated To P H Poet, "Fog Runner' ]

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Fog Runner went streaking on the football field;
I mean he was running naked. He did NOT yield...
to the referee's blasts from the ref's whistle.
But what DID stop FR's run was a BIG damn thistle..
under his "tenderfoot"-feet, both left AND right!
His jumping around & dangling was a Horrible Sight!


(February something...2018)

Friday, February 23, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: humorous,running,sports
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
My PH friend, Fog Runner, is writing an epic novel, entitled "The Summer Before High School".He may not finish the 'run', but he's putting in an epic effort.

that-a-guy, FR! ! !

bri :)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 14 March 2018

Archimedes rushed into the public without clothes (naked) ... “Eureka! Eureka! I mean he was running naked...is it eureka that resembles Archimedes' story of getting something wonderful.....! I strongly believe your friend will come out with flying colors with a befitting end to his epic novel! All the best! (10)

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Fog Runner 24 March 2018

Appreciate your faith and comments, Dr Dillip! They are more appreciated than you might expect, good neighbor! Plus the analogy seems accurate. haha

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Loke Kok Yee 08 March 2018

Bri, For sure some will be titillated by the sight Although the 'dangling' may have the others in fright Thanks Bri '

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Fog Runner 10 March 2018

Hard to argue with such nude logic, but I promise to stay dressed in public from now on :)

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Valsa George 06 March 2018

I feel sorry for him! Is he still on the tracks dangling his wounded......? I am sure your friend will somehow reach successful to the finishing point and achieve his target! All the Best to him!

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Fog Runner 10 March 2018

All the best to you, too, ma'am. And thank you! - healing is underway plus I think I'm wearing clothes again.

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Fog Runner 23 February 2018

I am actually immortalized in a rhyme? You rock, Bri - no wonder people revere you around here. Only thing I question is the idea that any hypothetical dangling of mine was horrible to see. haha Keep on writing poems, sir. We will keep on reading c:

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