The night you vanished
From my life I found no stars
Shining in the sky
No wind blew lifting tufts
Of my black hair
I felt like lost in the brazen
Twists and turns of the path
Leading to my adulthood
The night you breathed last
My heart pounded like a storm
Creating chaos
Darkness gripped my mind
And I fell on the ground
To wake up in my father's lap
In the black hours of the morn
I can feel your deepest grief in this well captured poem, tears are falling down my cheeks, so fantastically worded, reminds me of my own beloved Mom
Presented in full brilliance, a finest Elegy for your beloved Mother, thank you so much Anil Sir
This sad poem touched my heart. A mother's love is like no other.
Losing our Mum, is the biggest heartbreaking wrench we will ever face in our lives x Thank you for sharing.
Excellently expressed! .. Beyond #ing! ..++++++++++++++++++++++
This is ever so heart felt! .. And I'm so sorry for your loss! ..
Very touching...loss of life gives others around a great pain...if it happens to be our own mother..then it gives us severe pain of sorrow that we are not able to get out of it...a good expressive write on mother's death...indeed touching
So sad the numb reality felt when one loses a loved one...well penned
I'm feeling the edge of a tear reading this, the title alone was painful enough, reading this felt like a piece of my soul was stripped. I can't ever end the pain. But I feel for you, thank you for sharing
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I commented THREE times, all three times I have got a RED SIGNAL. I cannot comment with a one liner response.