Sonnet 53: On Sleep Poem by David Wood

Sonnet 53: On Sleep

Rating: 5.0


Oh sleep, you hide from me until the dawn
I lay awake through the dark of the night
My head on my soft pillow until morn
When I awake from a nightmare with fright.

Sleep you escape me in the night time hours,
Time lying awake which should be sleeping
Oh, how can I overcome your powers?
You leave me lying there alone weeping.

Oh to sleep perchance to dream of my sweet
Is but a day dream that I allude to
For we will never again meet or greet
And there is really nothing I can do.

To lay alone between the sheets awake
Is a pastime I wish not to partake.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tirupathi Chandrupatla 23 June 2013

Getting good sleep is a bliss. There are many who 'lay awake through the dark of the night'. You stated the plight of many through your own feelings in your poem. Mind is strange. How do we keep it free from all thoughts to get restful sleep? Thank you for another nice sonnet.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 23 June 2013

A bird can't fly but the wings so a man can't dream if there is no sleep... lovely sonnet with the tinge of sorrow

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Valerie Dohren 23 June 2013

Me too David, sleep often eludes me. Great sonnet.

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Wahab Abdul 23 June 2013

i used to sleep too much that was my pleasure now poetry doest allow me to sleepmuch, you write a beutiful sonnet with graet flow.. i liked it

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Paul Brookes 23 June 2013

Ah elusive Morpheus many a night have I wished for your touch. As a part time insomniac I know what it is to lie awake. You have managed to capture it completely, except my pillows always feel like stone. 10/10 David. =: OD BB

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Shahzia Batool 27 June 2013

a subtle poem indeed! i wonder it is on sleep or on vigils! nicely done......

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Valsa George 25 June 2013

A sleepless night brings into our mind a train of painful memories often! If we are able to sleep away, we will be rid of all nagging thoughts! Sleep is nature's balm! May you be blessed with sound sleep and be visited by beautiful dreams of your union with your beloved! My prayers! !

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Joseph Anderson 24 June 2013

I love sonnets, even about sleeplessness. Well. you got a good poem out of it. A FINE JOB

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Kavya . 24 June 2013

a very nice heartfelt sonnet written by you David...how beautifully you have cited the situations of many who do not get peaceful sleep at night, we just lie awake on bed and stare at the roof, its really so horrifying, not getting a peaceful sleep! a very good write

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Lorraine Colon 23 June 2013

I guess we've all been there. Restless mind syndrome, I call it. Maybe that's the ideal time to work on our poems! You did a good job on yours!

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