Unn ki yaadon ki
jo hoti he sahar
shaam k baad
Hum ko lagta nahi
taareek nagar
shaam k baad
Har taraf dard
chamakta he
sitaaron ki tarha
Sub manazir mein
ubhartay hen gohar
shaam k baad
Saath rehta he,
mera haal
suna karta he
Ik parinda he jo
jaata nhi ghar
shaam k baad
Mujh ko bus yaad
meri maa ki
boht aati he
Jab bhi chhati he
mere ghar pe kohor
shaam k baad
jab laga
kaam mukkammal huay
saaray apnay
baandh len ge
kisi din
rakht-e-safar
shaam k baad
saaray apnay baandh len ge kisi din rakht-e-safar shaam k baad...yeap we will go or we have to go one day or another day, poignant poem with the intensity of emotions...well done ma'm
Sham ke baad beyond the dusk /memories of morning beyond the dusk, Where is the darkness beyond the dusk its a lovely poem
Sunder nazam likhi hai. Maa ke na hone par dukh ki abhivaykti/bayani ko aapne appni maa ke liye sunderta se kiya hai.
It's rich and beautiful! ! ! i call such poetry as SCRUMPTIOUS, delicious poetry as you can enjoy every bit of it. loved each and every line of this poem. You write with your HEART, your inner most feelings come forth. This poem is simply beautiful. you started with a beautiful thought. Unn ki yaadon ki jo hoti he sahar shaam k baad Hum ko lagta nahi taareek nagar shaam k baad The ending is sad but it's a true fact of life. jab laga kaam mukkammal huay saaray apnay baandh len ge kisi din rakht-e-safar shaam k baad Though the atmosphere in this poem is gloomy but the beauty of this poem has overpowered the gloom. i loved it! ! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Har taraf dard chamakta he Pain shines in all directions like stars in the sky after the evening. Beautiful poem.