Shahzia Batool

Freshman - 694 Points (Pakistan)

Shaam k baad ii (urdu)


Unn ki yaadon ki
jo hoti he sahar
shaam k baad
Hum ko lagta nahi
taareek nagar
shaam k baad
Har taraf dard
chamakta he
sitaaron ki tarha
Sub manazir mein
ubhartay hen gohar
shaam k baad
Saath rehta he,
mera haal
suna karta he
Ik parinda he jo
jaata nhi ghar
shaam k baad
Mujh ko bus yaad
meri maa ki
boht aati he
Jab bhi chhati he
mere ghar pe kohor
shaam k baad
jab laga
kaam mukkammal huay
saaray apnay
baandh len ge
kisi din
rakht-e-safar
shaam k baad

Submitted: Tuesday, June 18, 2013
Edited: Friday, July 26, 2013

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The key-words shaam k baad are used by Farhat Abbas Shah-the poet!

Comments about this poem (Shaam k baad ii (urdu) by Shahzia Batool )

  • Rookie - 141 Points Muhammad Ali (1/7/2014 11:01:00 AM)

    ye poem.
    mery dil me utr gyi hy. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (6/23/2013 8:10:00 AM)

    Sham ke baad beyond the dusk /memories of morning beyond the dusk, Where is the darkness beyond the dusk its a lovely poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 558 Points Tribhawan Kaul (6/20/2013 1:52:00 AM)

    Sunder nazam likhi hai. Maa ke na hone par dukh ki abhivaykti/bayani ko aapne appni maa ke liye sunderta se kiya hai. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 687 Points Kavya . (6/18/2013 11:56:00 PM)

    sad poem but enjoyed reading! the words 'shaam ke baad' is powerful (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Passionate Reader (6/18/2013 3:03:00 PM)

    It's rich and beautiful! ! ! i call such poetry as SCRUMPTIOUS, delicious poetry as you can enjoy every bit of it. loved each and every line of this poem. You write with your HEART, your inner most feelings come forth. This poem is simply beautiful. you started with a beautiful thought.

    Unn ki yaadon ki
    jo hoti he sahar
    shaam k baad
    Hum ko lagta nahi
    taareek nagar
    shaam k baad

    The ending is sad but it's a true fact of life.

    jab laga
    kaam mukkammal huay
    saaray apnay
    baandh len ge
    kisi din
    rakht-e-safar
    shaam k baad

    Though the atmosphere in this poem is gloomy but the beauty of this poem has overpowered the gloom. i loved it! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Farah Ilyas (6/18/2013 12:41:00 PM)

    saaray apnay
    baandh len ge
    kisi din
    rakht-e-safar
    shaam k baad...yeap we will go or we have to go one day or another day, poignant poem with the intensity of emotions...well done ma'm (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,683 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (6/18/2013 10:20:00 AM)

    Har taraf dard
    chamakta he
    Pain shines in all directions like stars in the sky after the evening. Beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

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