Treasure Island

Julian Mann


River Feeling


River feeling is
As simple as
Closing your eyes
For a moment.

Everything flows like river

River feeling is
As smooth as
Everything after
The first step.

Everything flows like river

River feeling is
easy as forgetting
Walking boots.

Everything flows like river

River feeling is
nice as
iron ties
Coming off.

Everything flows like river
Everything flows like river
Everything flows like river
Everything is good and flows
like river

Submitted: Tuesday, July 03, 2012
Edited: Tuesday, July 03, 2012

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  • Michael Lasalle (7/19/2012 4:24:00 PM)

    Breathtaking. The words are but a fraction of the total sum. The reciprocating manner is the mastery
    of the intended intention, for it is never about the river, but what flows out of art. The theme transports
    the reader to another place and time, delivers a sense of subtle enlightened perspective, brilliant. (Report) Reply

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