Midnights Voice

Freshman - 1,035 Points (November 3,1950 / Selma, Alabama)

Rains Of Niar (A collaboration of Unwritten Soul and Midnights Voice)


Behind the dark sky
Or between the space of the stars
Where do you hide at midnight
Say hello; eternal

Kiss me your whispers
Tell me dear,
Where are we going?

When night blinds our eyes on life
You bury hopes in the darkness

My heart does feel we'll be all right

Where the shine of morning hopes hiding
Abrassive rays gut out every shadow

Wave off the smoke of knowledge
Taste history, how bitter it is
Have you told me where you are going

You leave me with nothing
But a page of rhyme on line
You posted on a Saturday evening
That there is no more time

Submitted: Thursday, February 28, 2013
Edited: Friday, March 01, 2013

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

Thank you Unwritten Soul fo your words and wisdom.
Niar is a small town in Iran. If it is spelled backwards it spells rain.

Comments about this poem (Rains Of Niar (A collaboration of Unwritten Soul and Midnights Voice) by Midnights Voice )

  • Bronze Star - 7,217 Points Neela Nath (3/7/2013 10:46:00 PM)

    It's very stunning to see that two minds create so stupendous poem showing no difference in style and chice of words. Amazing. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,025 Points Valerie Dohren (3/3/2013 10:41:00 AM)

    Very poignant write, deep and mysterious. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,070 Points Diane Hine (3/1/2013 5:37:00 AM)

    Two very different styles meld to produce a unique mix. A sad conclusion. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 987 Points Unwritten Soul (3/1/2013 3:09:00 AM)

    The rain fall washing the proves of pain, but dirt of hurt sometimes too hard to remove, if only there is love mixed in the cloud before drop....sure all hardness removed easily even in softness_Soul (Report) Reply

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