Aftab Alam

Gold Star - 39,822 Points (15 th April 1967 / , , RANCHI,)

Pubdom - Poem by Aftab Alam

Jack sat into the tub
With beer and music on
Dreamy posters all around
Dancing with Ecstasy
In the world of fantasy
This is my pub
Me a king of my pubdom.

Comments about Pubdom by Aftab Alam

  • Gold Star - 5,737 Points Patricia Grantham (7/12/2013 7:01:00 AM)

    Sounds like Jack is having a heck of a
    good time. Let the good times roll in the kingdom
    of Pubdom. So hilarious. Enjoyed. (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 4,065 Points Wahab Abdul (6/25/2013 10:42:00 PM)

    nice and read with one breath, , , that means the poem has its great flow.. love it (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,588 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (6/24/2013 10:05:00 AM)

    One is emperor of one's own kingdom of life. Nice short poem. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 69,266 Points Gajanan Mishra (6/24/2013 5:00:00 AM)

    world of fantasy, good write my dear friend.
    please read my new poems. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, June 24, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, June 24, 2013

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