Ali Adamson


Probability


If I open the door...

When, it is knocking

If it is pain outside...

Submitted: Friday, March 21, 2014
Edited: Saturday, March 22, 2014

Topic of this poem: Fear


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Comments about this poem (Probability by Ali Adamson )

  • Bronze Star - 2,085 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (7/8/2014 1:48:00 AM)

    Wow a short poem on caution, poetic muse. Yes we need to be alert, pain cud b outside! Nice to read u again. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 29,101 Points Gajanan Mishra (4/11/2014 5:53:00 AM)

    when a person is not attached to external contacts, he attains eternal bliss, very fine. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,092 Points Unwritten Soul (4/5/2014)

    Dare it to greet
    or leave it away from your feet
    Unless you chest can maintain the beats_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,881 Points * Sunprincess * (3/29/2014 2:42:00 PM)

    ........just be careful cause who is knocking may not be a friend....always be alert and on guard...excellent write.. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,179 Points Valsa George (3/29/2014 7:07:00 AM)

    If there is pain or danger outside and if someone knocks just for a shelter, it is humane on our part to open the door for him! The dilemma is intensely felt here!

    Thank you Ali for your sweet comment on my 300th poem! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,751 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (3/24/2014 10:01:00 PM)

    Knocking may indicate pain outside. To open or not to open is the question. Nice poem. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 701 Points Shahzia Batool (3/24/2014 11:51:00 AM)

    this IF...is the main issue...! ! ! (Report) Reply

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