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(15-08-1995 / new delhi 73)

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Primitive you

Sweeping the memories
from the past i had
I never acknowledged
Its you, what i dodged
from the life, i had.

Im done thinking,
Im shuting it down,
for whats it worth?
If yu dont want my love crown.

i guess this is it,
let me clear the air for you,
Im noone, no-one else,
But a primitive you.

Submitted: Saturday, October 05, 2013
Edited: Monday, October 07, 2013


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  • Shraddha The Poetess (10/5/2013 12:20:00 PM)

    vryy nicely writen in a creative way..........
    well done bhaiya..........

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