Precious Day Poem by Rekha Mandagere

Precious Day

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For every occurrence
There is relevance
But hidden with evidence
If one has perseverance
To know it with infinite endurance
And displaying prudence
Taking more of guidance
Maintaining strict balance
Devoid from wild violence
Having complete confidence
In the valuable rhymes of Terence
Which makes one smile with patience
The glowing candles witness radiance
Offering way for a precious day to grace!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terence George Craddock 15 November 2011

Happy Birthday, my friend happy birthday This should be a precious day! This is a precious day, I share it with my beautiful sister Rekha, which makes the day far more precious beautiful wonderful, than it ever was in the past before as we share our birthdays. Wishing my twin an especially beautiful birthday, will be thinking of you often throughout the day in appreciation of our friendship. Pass on my blessings to your husband and sons and enjoy your time with all your friends and family who are with you today. Happy Birthday and God Bless you and all close to you. Amen. With love and best wishes, sincerely your twin, Terence :)

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Unwritten Soul 16 November 2011

Happy Birthday to you two....Both of you, I witnessing the great unity of life here. Terence and Rekha the names who big with love and peace...I enjoy every moment with this twin hahahahaha....I wish all the greatest wishes for all of you, no bad days at all if still have you will be greater and stronger LOVE and Peace for This Twin Soul

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Hosny Soliman 17 November 2011

Happy Birth day for both of you, thanks dearest friend for your nice comments.May it came late but with more pleasure i like to share.Yes it's really a precious day even we lost more year from our life.But also we can say it add more experience to us, also give us more hope for better future.Happy birth day my friend.

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Elena Sandu 17 November 2011

What a beautiful heartfelt poem! I hope is not too late for me to send both of you best wishes, love and lots of smiles!

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Ramesh Rai 23 November 2011

Respected Rekhajee you have strictly maintained the rhythm of 'ce' in your poem. but you have greeted someone on birthday, you have not mention the person. any way please convey my wishes too in the same line which you will get in my poem ''A LONG MARCH'. with kind regards ramesh rai

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Heather Wilkins 12 August 2013

every day is precious so we need to make the most of it. a good read

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Neetha Sasidharan 05 January 2012

awesome rhymes.....really grt..

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Vipins Puthooran 10 December 2011

What a beautiful poem! /love the rhyme-pattern, , [Excellent poetry]

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Bernard Snyder 07 December 2011

This is a well written piece' Rekha! A lot of times we don't know how 'precious' the day really is. Thanks for sharing such a lovely write!

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Hans Vr 30 November 2011

A birthday wish full of wisdom written in very nice and melodious verses. It is already 2 weeks later, but I still wish both you a happy belated birthday.

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