Where Is Time? Poem by Rekha Mandagere

Where Is Time?

Rating: 4.9


Time and tide waits for none
But I have waited all alone for one
It is none other than my ideal son
At last my time has begun!

The concept, time is infinite and undefined
Whereas my time interval is short but well defined
We strive hard all the time to enjoy few moments of time.
Please make those precious moments truly rhyme!

Stretch your few seconds of mine to the eternal bounds;
Make me feel your life all around.
Bring out all your lively feelings to the earthly grounds;
A noble son like you on this earth is rarely found!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wendy Thopliss 26 February 2011

I love your poems you write for your son. they show such love only a mother could feel. if you get time please read my (will he still love me) i think you might enjoy it as it is also about love.

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Bernard Snyder 01 March 2011

Wow! Rekha! This is a lovely piece. Well- worded and written with a lot of love and passion. I give it a 10' as well. I am truly a fan! Thanks for sharing. I will continue to read more as long as you keep writing. You can rate some of mine if you like!

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Sally Plumb Plumb 10 March 2011

I enjoy special time with my son, too.

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Cristina Teodor 16 March 2011

This poem is a nice invitation to your son, and a wonderful question. You interpose time 'infinite and undefined' with love to your son.This two things are connected in order to let you to exert your duty as a mother to your son.Your time is 'short interval but well defined'. So you invite your son to 'Stretch your few seconds of mine to eternal bounds' to 'make me feel your life all around'.You show as that time is never enough for a mother to a enjoy her son..Cristina Teodor

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Louis Cecile 16 March 2011

I enjoyed the way this poem interlinked and each line compares the two links. Very well done simply written, but with meaning.

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Luo Zhihai 20 December 2020

Time, endless. But human time is limited. Cherish time!

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Khairul Ahsan 24 June 2018

Mother's love for her son or daughter is ethereal and eternal, it never ceases, it transcends all barriers and borders. A nice poem that I enjoyed reading.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 28 June 2012

I have a son myself, he is a great comfort to me.

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Terence George Craddock 19 September 2011

The title 'Where Is Time? ' intrigues with the longing, internal wait for an 'ideal son'. This eternal love for the awaited child, this universal longing, can be expressed in many ways. One of the best mystic ways is as you have said 'The concept, time is infinite and undefined' which flows into many universal truth. Your son is fortunate to recieve such unconditional love as his blessing. Beautiful sentiments.

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Bernard Snyder 23 August 2011

Hello my friend. I haven't heard from you in some time. I just thought I would dropp by and read some of your poems again. Stay in touch and I also rated some of them again!

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