Permanent Peace Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

ethereal... beautiful...

a very nice write...

Lovely read and simplicity.

OM, Persian Nightingale good to hear from you! Your poem is the seed of the present that agree and breathe permanent Peace. Thanks for sharing....

Brevity of words and insightful poetry

I love this poem...it is like a breeze of fresh air.Great write!

Interesting, the minimalistic approach; poignant the appeal for peace

yes dear poet. i too think the same. we are living in calculations... in seconds, past, or future, living in dreams or plans. we r not here in life, in breath, or actually not always. if it is true, it is breath that is suffering alone? v should live our breath... and the POEM... I feel, the short lines and messages are near to a silence. For the reader, it must to read between the line, see what the PAUSE is. Or, it is also possible that i cant approch your theme n thoughts, but i tried and i like this poem. Peace...

Very thoughtful poem..Thank you...

Swimming in the sea of spiritualistic silence!