My eyes
Were glazed over before,
All veins
Have the gelid water
Hot blood nor
Are we lost
In the face of destiny
Or full of power?
Spectral colors
Dye the time
Each hour
A second coat of paint
Should cover,
Pigments of love
In her Irises
Discover
2010/1/29
I liked too this a poem, especially its original ending, Amir..10... Kindest regards, Tsira
interesting metapho; you certainly have a way with words; had to loo up 'gelid' new to me :)
Exceptional, my friend. The true poet always gives himself away in words. Blessings from, Sandra
A thousand coats of paint could not hide the beauty of this poem. Well done my friend.
Well, I must say that I think this is a wonderful piece of poetry
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
yes i liked, but nothing can cover pigments of true love. ur 10