Ardent Love Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

Ardent Love

Rating: 3.5


Be my apostrophe before S
I'll second that motion
The possession beyond space and time
When the nude love swims in our notion

Give me a glass of wine darling
A glass of love potion
No I need more ecstasy
A dropp of your eyes' ocean

(2008/12/28)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Thad Wilk 01 January 2009

If you second that motion an have a glass of wine and love potion, i got the notion that a dropp from her eyes ocean, might be too much - emotion..? Another splendid read Shiraz! *10*! ! Friend Thad

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Lynda Robson 02 January 2009

I love the last two lines of this poem, excellent work, Happy New Year Nightingale 10 Lynda xx

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The eyes have it here! They rounded off the poem beautifully. A love poem of true art. Karin Anderson

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wow you amused me again with this poem... a fine love poem... nice

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Malini Kadir 05 January 2009

you do amuse with your ardent poems....! lovely! ! ! indeed....ardent!

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Lovely poem of love and passion.. nice one

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Dr Antony Theodore 28 December 2018

No I need more ecstasy A dropp of your eyes' ocean. very romantic to the point of becoming. thanku dear poet. tony

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 29 December 2014

Give me a glass of wine darling A glass of love potion No I need more ecstasy A droop of your eyes' ocean Beautifully composed love poem.Well expressed Well done Col Muhammad Khalid khan

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Mihaela Pirjol 18 July 2014

A lovely poem, a truly ardent love expressed in a unique style.I love it! Thank you.

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Rachel Butler 19 September 2009

When the nude love swims in our notion Rachel Ann Butler

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