Autumn's Lips Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

Autumn's Lips

Rating: 3.1


Of his toes
Winter stands on the tips
Grazing the treetops
He reads a letter and
Suddenly trips

A spring invitation
In beautiful scented scripts
A message from the ladybird
Who lives among the rose hips

The breeze gives the letter and leaves
As she sees the ice chips
The winter will never come
If you stop kissing
The autumn's lips

(2008/12/11)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarah Sisson 13 December 2008

Very well done...thank you for this one

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Vinod Kumar 16 December 2008

Beautiful lines for the favourite seasons in our hearts, Thanks for sharing the Contemporary important Work, With Prays and Regards, (Vinod)

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I love this one also Very beautiful Thanks for sharing -Brie

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Thad Wilk 17 December 2008

A delightful poem, 'great rime an blend', wonderfully depicted this message you send! Best wishes Shiraz! *10*! ! Friend Thad

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C. P. Sharma 19 December 2008

A highly poetic and exalted autumn. Its sweetness lingers on in my mind. CP

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Dr Antony Theodore 28 December 2018

A spring invitation In beautiful scented scripts....... beautiful and very poetic.. you have an endearing heart. thank u. tony

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 24 November 2009

Great personification 'Autumn's lip' Of his toes winter stands on the tip graging the treetops he reads a letter and suddenly trips... Persian Nightingale, you out did yourself with the poem about autumn...vivid images and a fresh perception. A 10, exponentially

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Rachel Butler 19 September 2009

In beautiful scented scripts A message from the ladybird Who lives among the rose hips Rachel Ann Butler

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sky dreams 28 July 2009

i very much enjoyed this... i absolutely love autumn, i can't wait till august is over so autumn can come.. there's nothing better than new england's fall season... great write!

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Marla Speece 15 July 2009

I love the autumn season. The way the leaves changes colors like our eyes when that certain someone makes us tremble.

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