Persian Nightingale


An Outstanding Offering - Poem by Persian Nightingale

Remember
The first day of December
When He gave us
An offering
An artwork!
His love’s ember

(For Anjali S.)
(Happy birthday)
(Anjali Means 'offering' in Sanskrit)


Comments about An Outstanding Offering by Persian Nightingale

  • Rookie Reshma Ramesh (12/6/2008 2:18:00 AM)

    superb write for anjali............
    happy birthday anjali.............! ! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 3 Points Dr Hitesh Sheth (12/2/2008 8:52:00 AM)

    An outstanding offering
    A Olive branch of of the God
    A heavenly birth
    to the suffering earth
    So to fill the earthly life
    with mirth (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tsira Goge (12/2/2008 5:55:00 AM)

    Good gift for the friend... Very beautiful...10...
    Tsira (Report) Reply

  • Rookie C T Heart (12/2/2008 5:17:00 AM)

    fine, short yet prescious gift to offer. Thanks for the wonderful read. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Lynda Robson (12/2/2008 1:38:00 AM)

    A lovely birthday tribute to Anjali who is indeed outstanding, well said Nightingale,
    10
    Lynda xx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 8 Points Anjali Sinha (12/2/2008 1:16:00 AM)

    heyyyyyy Amir,
    thanks for this piece of love and good wishes from you.
    I am so touched by your kindness. Thank you very much
    I shall always cherish and remember you all my friends on Ph
    A+++++ and 10++ regards Anjali
    this goes to my fav. list (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 2, 2008

Poem Edited: Friday, December 5, 2008


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