Abortion Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

Abortion

Rating: 3.3


Wild flowers
No care
No water
We are oppressed
We can see
Feel
The creator
Our blood is red
We are alive
Though
We are condemned to
A Silent death

(2008/1/13)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
... ... 14 January 2008

Powerful, I love this part: 'We are condemned to a silent death', an abortion is a silent yet painful death of a creation of us and God. I absolutely love it. Your rose.

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Sherry Arzish 26 January 2008

poignant and beautiful poem.nice write take care shiralley arzish

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Chris Mendros 07 February 2008

with a beating heart, giving voice to the voiceless. Nice work.

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K. V. Venkataramana 13 April 2008

A touching poem. Thanks for sharing.

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C.R. Clark 26 May 2008

A powerful poem, my friend, and written from a point of view that is, so often, ignored by so many. Thank you Richard

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Sarah Abdullah 19 September 2013

Ummmmm.. I like this one a lot.

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Petra Wigge 23 June 2010

Though we are condemned to die, , we are alive... feelllllll the creator....... powerful lines against abortion. my ur poem be a warning for all those who mecilessly kill their own children in the womb. thank you for taking up a powerful theme.. thank you

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Indira Renganathan 11 June 2009

Soul stirring on a strong subject....good poem

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T S 24 April 2009

Powerful write on a very controversal subject 10/10

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Amy Douglass (Fifita) 14 January 2009

Another good write. This is one of the things i like about you, your poems can be short but in those words you put so much emotion and significance into them.

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