Persian Nightingale


Abortion - Poem by Persian Nightingale

Wild flowers
No care
No water
We are oppressed
We can see
Feel
The creator
Our blood is red
We are alive
Though
We are condemned to
A Silent death

(2008/1/13)


Comments about Abortion by Persian Nightingale

  • Rookie - 10 Points Sarah Abdullah (9/19/2013 6:19:00 PM)

    Ummmmm..
    I like this one a lot. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Petra Wigge (6/23/2010 12:28:00 PM)

    Though we are condemned to die, , we are alive...
    feelllllll the creator.......
    powerful lines against abortion. my ur poem be a warning for all those who mecilessly kill their own children in the womb. thank you for taking up a powerful theme.. thank you (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 782 Points Indira Renganathan (6/11/2009 10:10:00 AM)

    Soul stirring on a strong subject....good poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie T S (4/24/2009 4:07:00 PM)

    Powerful write on a very controversal subject
    10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Amy Douglass (Fifita) (1/14/2009 3:58:00 AM)

    Another good write. This is one of the things i like about you, your poems can be short but in those words you put so much emotion and significance into them. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nathalie Petersson (10/11/2008 2:21:00 PM)

    Its a great poem.
    Keep writing!

    Take Care! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,486 Points Adeline Foster (10/8/2008 1:43:00 PM)

    Thanks. Worth the look. Very well.
    Adeline (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 8 Points Anjali Sinha (10/6/2008 2:53:00 AM)

    a thought provoking message--
    unwanted and unborn
    ++++10 as always
    regards anjalie
    (yor poems are short but
    full of meaning) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Victoria Dame (7/6/2008 3:32:00 PM)

    Your writing skill is very powerful and this poem shows it at its best (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points C.R. Clark (5/26/2008 8:45:00 AM)

    A powerful poem, my friend, and written from a point of view that is, so often, ignored by so many. Thank you
    Richard (Report) Reply

  • Rookie K. V. Venkataramana (4/13/2008 11:27:00 AM)

    A touching poem. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points Chris Mendros (2/7/2008 12:55:00 AM)

    with a beating heart, giving voice to the voiceless.
    Nice work. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sherry Arzish (1/26/2008 5:54:00 AM)

    poignant and beautiful poem.nice write take care shiralley arzish (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ... ... (1/14/2008 8:39:00 AM)

    Powerful, I love this part: 'We are condemned to a silent death', an abortion is a silent yet painful death of a creation of us and God. I absolutely love it. Your rose. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 13, 2008

Poem Edited: Monday, January 14, 2008


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