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Permanent Peace

Silence
Thoughtful, thoughtless seed,
Listen to the present
Breath
Just agreed,
A warm light
Cast a spell
Spirits rise,
Wisdom 'awake'
Permanent Peace
Arise

Submitted: Saturday, September 07, 2013
Edited: Saturday, September 07, 2013


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  • Gillena Cox (1/3/2014 4:59:00 AM)

    Interesting, the minimalistic approach; poignant the appeal for peace

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  • Muhammad Ali (11/24/2013 3:33:00 PM)

    yes
    dear poet. i too think the same. we are living in calculations... in
    seconds, past, or future, living in dreams or plans. we r not here in
    life, in breath, or actually not always. if it is true, it is breath
    that is suffering alone? v should live our breath...
    and the POEM... I feel, the short lines and messages are near to a
    silence. For the reader, it must to read between the line, see what the
    PAUSE is.
    Or, it is also possible that i cant approch your theme n thoughts, but i
    tried and i like this poem. Peace...

  • Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black (11/22/2013 10:12:00 AM)

    Very thoughtful poem..Thank you...

  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (10/23/2013 9:02:00 PM)

    Swimming in the sea of spiritualistic silence!

  • Guy Lip-more (10/15/2013 4:17:00 PM)

    If only hey, good write.

  • Dohhoon Yang (10/15/2013 1:30:00 AM)

    You did it? Great cools

  • Clarence Prince (10/9/2013 2:41:00 PM)

    Wouldn't that be very wonderful if Permanent peace Arise could really arise? Well done!

  • Joseph Poewhit (9/30/2013 9:59:00 AM)

    Nice wish for the time

  • Dipy Hermonite (9/25/2013 3:42:00 AM)

    A very good write indeed. Have rated your poem.
    Could you read and rate my poem. Link is given below

    http: //www.poemhunter.com/contest-vote/your-world-my-lord/
    Regards
    Dipy

  • Heather Wilkins (9/23/2013 3:08:00 PM)

    permanent peace arise. this is what the world is in need of good write

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