dear poet. i too think the same. we are living in calculations... in
seconds, past, or future, living in dreams or plans. we r not here in
life, in breath, or actually not always. if it is true, it is breath
that is suffering alone? v should live our breath...
and the POEM... I feel, the short lines and messages are near to a
silence. For the reader, it must to read between the line, see what the
Or, it is also possible that i cant approch your theme n thoughts, but i
tried and i like this poem. Peace...