Perilous Pathway [an Analogy] .... [serious; For A Friend; Personal; Relationships] Poem by Bri Edwards

Perilous Pathway [an Analogy] .... [serious; For A Friend; Personal; Relationships]

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Ah! the joys of tramping along a country pathway on a sunny day.
It’s Autumn and Indian Summer warms you..... all along the way.
Here and there you spot a bird, though they’re not singing as in the
Spring.
The tree leaves have not quite started to fade. Joy to your heart, Nature does bring.

A harmless snake slithers into the grass.... as you pass it by.
You see a few fluttering insects, and once or twice a pesky fly.
But overall you’re feeling safe, despite an ever-present danger;
you really should have read the notice of Poison Plants, posted by a Ranger.

They will not kill you, but they can often bring misery to your life,
if you don’t learn to heed the danger...... and recognize their leaves-of-strife.
Three leaflets, joined, a shiny compound leaf, with leaf edges often notched.
The oil they give off, if you’re sensitive to it, can leave your skin blistered and blotched.

Scratching the affected parts of your body may bring some fleeting bit of relief,
but only causes more damage, in the long run, just bringing YOU more grief.

Now for the analogy I’ve promised you, the Reader, in the poem’s title.
I’ve led you to it skillfully, as a cowboy steers his horse...... using bit and bridle.

I’ve used a “country pathway” as an analogy for a cherished love affair.
Both can bring to you much pleasure, but of the danger you should beware.
Sometimes the dangers are hard to spot; sometimes they should be all too clear.
But once you’ve suffered more than once, it probably is time to change your gear.
To “change gears”, to me, means to change your ways, hopefully for the better,
something like retreating from the rain, before you get...... even WETTER.
Because getting wetter, like poison plants, can lead to a Terrible State.

Avoiding that “country pathway” [though at times beautiful] may be the way to go.
Likewise there may come a time to leave a relationship; hopefully you’ll know.
And after suffering heartache, which always causes your Spirit to burn,
you’ll cast off the person who always brings you down, and in another direction turn.

As there ARE pathways in Nature free of ever-present danger,
there also is someone better-suited to YOUR life. Heed the words of this Ranger.

(December 3,2013)

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
my elder step-daughter,30ish, has been in an off-and-on relationship for years with a man who, for whatever the reasons, seems to cause her heartache periodically. it is a pain for her and for my wife (her mom) . she can't seem to shake the danger once and for all. maybe she is the dangerous one? : ( i'm sending this to her.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Muzahidul Reza 12 January 2018

Ah! the joys of tramping along a country pathway on a sunny day. It’s Autumn and Indian Summer warms you..... all along the way. Spring, ...... Great write with wonderful imagery, Again, you really should have read the notice of Poison Plants, posted by a Ranger. ....... quite great write Your imegeries show your commemts on some one, ...............? May be dear and near to advise or suggest we need, like your ways of writings, , Thanks for sharing the poem with us,

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Simone Inez Harriman 01 August 2017

It's so hard to observe the ones we love stumbling in life shunning the best advice and resisting all attempts of positive change. And how helpless one feels when unable to cushion the pain and hurt for those who love them. Sometimes it seems people are irresistibly drawn to a negative experience even when they are fully aware of the consequences. It's almost as if life needs to rub their nose in the bad experience long enough until the soul desires change.

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