There was dark and despair in the castle of life
When moon peeped through a skylight in light so bright
And words came floating on beams of silvery light
I never thought words to be a soothing treat
When heart and mind seek a loving retreat
Those words can weave a wreath to greet!
When words sing like reeds in winds
Phantoms of distress demons of chagrin
Fly way and lulling sounds freed, unpinned
Nice poem. And words came floating on beams of light, great imagination.
Only words but so sweet And make the heart feel so great/ well done... thanks to share
Good triplets...for rhyming you made use of sounds compatibility! ! !
in the castle of life words can be so soothing in the moonlight. yet they can be a power tool.
I like your way with words. A very descriptive write about the power of words, done with grace and beauty. So well penned. A 10
lovely poems with lovely lines but con linesVWhen words sing like reeds in winds, Phantoms of distress demons of chagrin Fly way and lulling sounds freed, unpinne
There was dark and despair in the castle of life When moon peeped through a skylight in light so bright.... yes words have power to command over, well done....nice poem
When words sing like reeds in winds Phantoms of distress demons of chagrin Fly way and lulling sounds freed, unpinned Beautiful lines! ! Yes! Sweet words, kind words, words of assurance, words of concern.... they can work wonders! Enjoyed! !
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I would like to translate this poem
in the castle of life is a good phrase to begin with poem...and words came floating on the beam of light...nice saying good poem.. love it..