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Ekaterina Polischuk

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One Rainy Night


One part of droplet is the light
It keeps a poor thought inside,
It makes the water just fall down
To fix the mind by loner thrown.
It`s raining hard, all streets are wet,
The city looks like spider`s net
With tens of crystal cold eyes.
It sleeps in silence, piles wise.
All people pass the storefronts
Just going-round road ponds,
Umbrellas taking in the hands,
Enjoying time the weather lends.
They harry up to their love
To stray among of feeling grove,
To visit home with piece of warm,
To shut the face from shame storm.
The rain is a wonder time,
To think about soul`s prime,
To watch the sun inside the heart
And love someone, believing start.

Submitted: Friday, March 30, 2012

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  • Rookie - 115 Points Pheko Motaung (4/5/2012 1:23:00 PM)

    I must thank you.Again and again for this poem and the other classic achievements of yours.Truly you have the gift. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points G.R. Gaus (4/3/2012 3:32:00 PM)

    I like the mood in this one, rather than running away from the rain you have created a possible new start beginning....... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 246 Points Harindhar Reddy (4/3/2012 1:06:00 PM)

    Yippee! Pitter, Patter rain drops, pitter-patter rain drops, it is fun to be rain and certainly highlighted the rain in your own style. Just as wind sways the trees in rain your poem is sweeping me on to my feet. A wholesome meaningful composition. I honor thee for writing such a poem on rain.
    One part of droplet is the light
    It keeps a poor thought inside,

    Great work, keep it up! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,376 Points Wahab Abdul (4/1/2012 4:58:00 AM)

    ''The city looks like spider`s net
    With tens of crystal cold eyes.
    It sleeps in silence, piles wise''

    pessimistic outlook! but the poem ends with some optimism....that's the point to be counted.....i like the poem very much...... (Report) Reply

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