Ekaterina Polischuk

Rookie - 28 Points (20.08.1987)

One Rainy Night - Poem by Ekaterina Polischuk

One part of droplet is the light
It keeps a poor thought inside,
It makes the water just fall down
To fix the mind by loner thrown.
It`s raining hard, all streets are wet,
The city looks like spider`s net
With tens of crystal cold eyes.
It sleeps in silence, piles wise.
All people pass the storefronts
Just going-round road ponds,
Umbrellas taking in the hands,
Enjoying time the weather lends.
They harry up to their love
To stray among of feeling grove,
To visit home with piece of warm,
To shut the face from shame storm.
The rain is a wonder time,
To think about soul`s prime,
To watch the sun inside the heart
And love someone, believing start.


Comments about One Rainy Night by Ekaterina Polischuk

  • Veteran Poet - 1,032 Points 1. Floy Dy Ra Floyd Floydson (7/25/2012 9:01:00 AM)

    yes, beautiful...let it rain..poor thoughts ;) (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Lusekelo Simwela (6/23/2012 2:49:00 PM)

    Whoa! you are one of those poets who have great imagery, nice writting (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,112 Points Pheko Motaung (4/5/2012 1:23:00 PM)

    I must thank you.Again and again for this poem and the other classic achievements of yours.Truly you have the gift. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points G.R. Gaus (4/3/2012 3:32:00 PM)

    I like the mood in this one, rather than running away from the rain you have created a possible new start beginning....... (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 835 Points Harindhar Reddy (4/3/2012 1:06:00 PM)

    Yippee! Pitter, Patter rain drops, pitter-patter rain drops, it is fun to be rain and certainly highlighted the rain in your own style. Just as wind sways the trees in rain your poem is sweeping me on to my feet. A wholesome meaningful composition. I honor thee for writing such a poem on rain.
    One part of droplet is the light
    It keeps a poor thought inside,

    Great work, keep it up! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,595 Points Wahab Abdul (4/1/2012 4:58:00 AM)

    ''The city looks like spider`s net
    With tens of crystal cold eyes.
    It sleeps in silence, piles wise''

    pessimistic outlook! but the poem ends with some optimism....that's the point to be counted.....i like the poem very much...... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Richi Levis (3/30/2012 4:12:00 PM)

    Very sincere poem! Beautiful and unique words! You are the unique poet! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, March 30, 2012



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