Valerie Dohren

Silver Star - 4,018 Points (13 January 1947 / Southport)

Oh Heart Of Mine..... - Poem by Valerie Dohren

Oh heart of mine don`t tarry long
Amongst the woeful earthly throng
Oh let me bide in worlds above
To feel that great celestial love

Oh heart of mine don`t linger here
To dwell in sadness, pain and fear
Relinquish yet the dark unknown
Think not to ever be alone

Oh heart of mine beat silently
That none may know, nor hear, nor see
How moves the sorrow hidden deep
To take my soul, to take my sleep

Oh heart of mine be still today
Let not your dreams be blown away
Do not be broken and forlorn
Tomorrow brings another dawn

Upon the wings of hope to fly
Above the clouds, beyond the sky,
To touch a land of peace divine
My spirit with the stars align


Comments about Oh Heart Of Mine..... by Valerie Dohren

  • Rookie - 35 Points Terry M (7/24/2015 3:27:00 PM)

    You do have a way with words for sure, you catch the eye and the mind and then the heart of anyone who has ever loved another. Thank you for that. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 16,729 Points * Sunprincess * (10/10/2012 10:22:00 PM)

    Wow this is most excellent and I can relate to this one..thanks.. :) (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 774 Points Juan Olivarez (7/3/2012 4:07:00 PM)

    I had to read it one more time Val. This time with the words of your message ringing in my ears, and it brought home the truth of this beautiful poem. The thing we wish for our loved ones more than any other thing is heaven. I understand. God bless. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 184 Points Karen Sinclair (6/22/2012 2:53:00 PM)

    Harmonious in words yet so sad...to me..with a lifting tie....thanks valerie for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,720 Points Neela Nath (6/22/2012 6:44:00 AM)

    While reading this poem it seemed that there should be no closing lines...Superb feeling.Ah! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 15 Points Swetha Vanakayalapati (6/22/2012 5:41:00 AM)

    Oh heart of mine don`t tarry long
    Amongst the woeful earthly throng

    this is a bold opening very deep............it shortly narrates what all you had penned successively........ (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 774 Points Juan Olivarez (6/20/2012 9:48:00 AM)

    beautiful a heart longing for the one true divine spiritual love. The one fromour maker. so very well written. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,166 Points Hans Vr (6/19/2012 9:43:00 AM)

    another wonderul heart warming poem, Valerie. Extremely well written. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,353 Points Unwritten Soul (6/16/2012 12:31:00 AM)

    Hmmm it really beautiful, soft and gentle poem, sweet and a bit bitter experience sounds like a sweet dark chocolate...i like it :) very well done poem, enjoyed it with nice rhyme...yum yum_Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 415 Points Captain Cur (6/14/2012 2:07:00 PM)

    Always nice to hear such soft metered rhyme
    and then I go off and crash and clang.
    Beautiful words to match the tempo and
    aura of this poem. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,773 Points Marieta Maglas (6/14/2012 8:15:00 AM)

    a beautiful poem with good rhythm and rhymes..... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Vincent Kuo (6/14/2012 7:37:00 AM)

    Wow, thank you for this lovely poem! I was caught by your 4th stanza: Oh heart of mine, be still today... what a subtle and elegant way to describe - this is literary genius! I think you speak for all of us, the hope and faith for what lies beyond. Truly a powerful poem! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 432 Points Danny Draper (6/12/2012 11:41:00 PM)

    A very nice poem, with beauty in its verse and a journey of hope for the spirit. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,308 Points Godfrey Morris (6/11/2012 10:35:00 AM)

    Wonderful words of poetry. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,166 Points Hans Vr (6/11/2012 10:32:00 AM)

    Beautiful and inspiring poem. Very well written.
    I love the wisdom expressed here in wonderful verses
    Also very good rhyming (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,913 Points Dave Walker (6/11/2012 8:26:00 AM)

    A really beautiful poem with real emotion.
    A great write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Simon Collins (6/11/2012 4:45:00 AM)

    A beautiful spirit is reflected here, thank you (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,107 Points Diane Hine (6/11/2012 4:42:00 AM)

    It doesn't matter what one's personal beliefs are, a beautiful poem is always a beautiful poem, as this is Val. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Heather Wilson (6/10/2012 9:33:00 AM)

    So beautiful Val, so heartfelt with such deep meaning, a wonderful poem. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, June 10, 2012



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