Valerie Dohren

Gold Star - 4,717 Points (13 January 1947 / Southport)

After The Rain - Poem by Valerie Dohren

After the rain the air is sweet
With glist`ning pools beneath my feet
Raindrops dripping down from the eaves
Teardrops slipping off shining leaves

And silken webs with crystals strung
Which span across the ivy hung
Around the trellised arbours green
A shimm`ring, luminescent scene

After the rain has kissed the earth
So Mother Nature brings new birth
Flowers to bloom with life anew
After the rain the sky is blue

After the rain comes a fresh dawn
After the rain new hope is born
After the rain has touched my soul
After the rain I shall be whole

Comments about After The Rain by Valerie Dohren

  • Gold Star - 37,682 Points Rajnish Manga (11/2/2015 10:59:00 AM)

    The enchanting display of the changes taking place after the rains and the sentiments arising in its wake are just wonderful. The awesome language is simply incredible. Loved reading it. Thanks. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 5,337 Points Ken E Hall (9/3/2015 5:24:00 AM)

    After the rain has touched my write this lovely poem, nothing like the garden after rain and the magic aroma it capture the scene so perfect...thanks and regrards (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 16,023 Points Bharati Nayak (8/27/2015 8:27:00 PM)

    After the rain comes a fresh dawn
    After the rain new hope is born
    After the rain has touched my soul
    After the rain I shall be whole - - - -Rain washes away the gloom filling with new hope, a new dawn.A stunningly beautiful write. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,536 Points Sally Plumb Plumb (4/28/2015 4:36:00 AM)

    What a beautiful garden you portray. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,243 Points Tony Adah (1/30/2015 1:53:00 PM)

    ......after the rain I shall be whole. Good rendition. Love it n thx for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 498 Points Perry Biggerstaff (6/3/2014 6:46:00 PM)

    Very nice always! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 13 Points Marianne Soher (12/28/2013 5:50:00 PM)

    Yes good to read you! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,092 Points Kanav Justa (11/28/2013 3:43:00 AM)

    .... yet another beautiful poem of yours... (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 749 Points Lawerence Mize (11/17/2013 5:56:00 PM)

    Wonderful. Love it. You earned a 10 on this one. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Ozark Mountain Homegrown (8/29/2013 11:36:00 PM)

    I loved this poem! I can almost feel and smell the rain...this brings the senses alive! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,384 Points Cynthia Buhain-baello (8/12/2013 10:21:00 PM)

    Wonderful, soothing. a delightful read Valerie (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,120 Points Heather Wilkins (6/19/2013 4:01:00 PM)

    beautiful poem about the rain. the rain refreshes nature and makes for a lovely write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 51 Points Terry M (3/2/2013 8:54:00 AM)

    Truly a poem that can touch the soul of all, we all have rainy day stories I should think. Well done kiddo and keep up the good work! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,740 Points Patricia Grantham (2/1/2013 3:16:00 PM)

    Val, I remember as a child growing up how we played in the rain and after the rain. Love this one! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 6 Points Stevie Taite (12/6/2012 3:51:00 PM)

    Still love this poem! Came back especially to read it again (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,215 Points Walterrean Salley (11/11/2012 2:19:00 PM)

    And after each trial, there is hope. Such a refreshing and uplifting poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sarang Mangi (11/10/2012 1:32:00 PM)

    beautiful.......... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 26 Points blank blank (10/28/2012 4:08:00 PM)

    Beautiful poetry, nice rhyme, fantastic imagery.
    10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 6 Points Stevie Taite (10/7/2012 4:36:00 AM)

    Wow! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Blooming lovely! Your poems make my eyes glisten with an emotive tear! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 36,621 Points * Sunprincess * (10/7/2012 12:40:00 AM)

    wow..very nice..enjoyed every rainy days.. :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 1, 2012

Poem Edited: Tuesday, May 1, 2012

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