Aftab Alam

Gold Star - 39,733 Points (15 th April 1967 / , , RANCHI,)

O Dancing Death - Poem by Aftab Alam

O dancing death..
From where do you come?

I fear to hear the word peace!
From the dirty Duke with Nuke.

How long peace will kill
The peace loving people?

I am dying without death.
O dancing Death..
From where do you come?


Comments about O Dancing Death by Aftab Alam

  • Rookie - 168 Points Ruby Mostazir (5/14/2013 1:32:00 AM)

    How long peace will kill
    The peace loving people? .......wonderful! really love dis (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 746 Points Shahzia Batool (5/11/2013 9:54:00 PM)

    How long peace will kill
    The peace loving people?

    I am dying without death...

    the antithesis has created a strong effect on your work, it's a deep apostrophe! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 211 Points Death Silence (5/10/2013 2:47:00 AM)

    i also wanna to say that OH dancing death from where do u come. really like it :) 10 for it (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,784 Points Elena Sandu (5/9/2013 5:12:00 PM)

    How long peace will kill
    The peace loving people? Deeply felt, thank you! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,742 Points Wahab Abdul (5/9/2013 11:06:00 AM)

    i am dying with out death
    come to me to hand shake
    the dirty duke of wonder land
    with a nuke ............wonderful... love it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 347 Points David Wood (5/9/2013 8:45:00 AM)

    Death is so much a part of life it can take your breath away. A lovely poem Aftab. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,953 Points Sallam Yassin (5/8/2013 6:29:00 PM)

    hypocrisy of words
    hanging the peace, and
    wiring us with fear
    packing of war within business plan and boom
    and baking the death dancing the death self distraction of mankind/well done and thanks to share (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 8, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, September 17, 2013


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