No Room For Hate Poem by Patricia Grantham
No Room For Hate
I went to a house and walked up to the gate
A man came outside and his name was called Hate
He asked me a question would you like to come in?
I then thought for a moment hate is no kin
He then wanted to know what do you think of me?
I said in reply I still have no need of thee
Hate stood for a moment and began to shake his head
Maybe I'll try and ask for his soul instead
Then he looked around and winked like a troll
What would you accept in exchange for your soul?
I looked at Hate with the blink of an eye
You'll live in this house until the day you die
Hate said my house is large with lots of room
I told him where he lives is filled with doom
He then decided to give up on his quest
And said I will try to persuade another guest
Copyright 2013
This is so creative. I like the way you use the title and make a perfect story on it. way to go for next thing! _SOul
always say no room for hate. a beautiful xlent write. but hatemis still now sitting in some corner of the world n trying to enter our soul, but we have to reply in your style,
Agree with all the reviews, fantastic central metaphor, perfectly balanced verses, great job
Congratulation Patricia for such a lovely poem that shone like a sun, here on PH
I looked at Hate with the blink of an eye You'll live in this house until the day you die ......../// beautifully penned, beautiful expression yeah; no room no room for hate in the heart of love those who know love never know how to hate if anyone says he/she is in love but he/she hates after a while then take an understand that it is not love......! !
A well articulated piece of poetry elegantly brought forth with clarity of thought and mind. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.
a wonderfully poem of how to treat hate to keep it locked up? now wouldn't that be great! ...............superbly written PG.
Wouldn't it be great if all forgot to hate? Good thing the Lord above always shows his love!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/24/2024 3:06:20 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Though the poem is superb and extremely brilliant of its theme, I think hate is there within every man. The difference is, those who show and those who control. Nice write ma'am!