Patricia Grantham

Gold Star - 5,305 Points (Moncks Corner, South Carolina)

On A Mission - Poem by Patricia Grantham

He woke me up this morning
To see a brand new day
So grateful for His mercy
I then knelt down to pray

Food to feed the hungry
Alms to give to the poor
A helping hand to someone
Never to want no more

Shelter for the homeless
That have no place to go
A comfort to the lonely
Say how I love them so

Bestow my earthly goods
To those who are in need
Giving of some precious time
Then sow some nurturing seed

Time that is much well spent
Is an important part of living
Show our concern for others
Seek a chance for our giving

Teaching the love of Jesus
To those that's eager to learn
Always going on a mission
My Angel wings I would earn


Comments about On A Mission by Patricia Grantham

  • Silver Star - 3,998 Points Paul Sebastian (8/10/2015 7:37:00 AM)

    You have put in a nutshell the very purpose of living. You have capsulized the need to give all the gifts bestowed in us. You reward is happiness! . Lovely poem! God bless you. (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,073 Points Louis Rams (1/11/2015 7:20:00 PM)

    the angel wings you had gotten, so very long ago when GOD blessed you with the dreams we all know (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,073 Points Louis Rams (1/11/2015 7:20:00 PM)

    the angel wings you had gotten, so very long ago when GOD blessed you with the dreams we all know (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,073 Points Louis Rams (1/11/2015 7:17:00 PM)

    the angel wings you had gotten so very long ago, when GOD blessed you with the words that we now know. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,815 Points Khairul Ahsan (11/6/2013 7:52:00 PM)

    This is a beautiful poem, just reading it once soothes one's heart! Deserves 10/10.
    'Bestow my earthly goods
    To those who are in need
    Giving of some precious time
    Then sow some nurturing seed'
    I liked this stanza the most.
    I've also read your biography, the three philosophies of life that you have mentioned are indeed very much inspiring. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,886 Points Amitava Sur (10/24/2013 1:51:00 AM)

    I can see a pious soul through these lovely lines........... excellent. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 18 Points Abhishek Mishra (9/23/2013 6:54:00 AM)

    It's a Great and Inspiring poem.
    You are my inspiration to write for a good cause...hats off to you: -) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,822 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (8/18/2013 10:02:00 AM)

    Glory to be the LORD...each line and stanza wreath in a string to beautify it...A Garland of Humanity...I thank also for the comment as a poet A bit late I was Sick with this sicky world 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Aswath Raman (8/16/2013 8:44:00 AM)

    Yes Ma'am! Thats how we earn the angel wings! To accomplish the tasks given by God and to work with him! I guess it is more of a spiritual write! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,936 Points Dave Walker (8/8/2013 1:11:00 PM)

    We all need faith at some point in our lives.
    A great poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 196 Points Indranil Bhaduri (7/30/2013 8:32:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem....this has a heavenly feel. Love it. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,073 Points Louis Rams (7/29/2013 7:17:00 AM)

    your angel wings were there from the very start, it was just hidden deep inside your heart (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,295 Points Tarobinson1103@gmail.com Robinson (7/15/2013 11:42:00 AM)

    You cam't earn you way to heaven.
    But you can make God to smile,
    He then grants you favor
    and you return the smile (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,418 Points David Wood (7/15/2013 11:19:00 AM)

    You've earned your angel wings with this lovely poem. Great work. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,470 Points Unwritten Soul (7/15/2013 10:11:00 AM)

    I love to see brightness through your mind, and it shine well in heart...so no wonder your write is very pretty art! _Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 93 Points Payal Parande (7/14/2013 11:13:00 AM)

    beautiful just beautiful i am in awe the words and the feelings in them is just beautiful.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 4 Points Nader Baheri (7/12/2013 4:42:00 AM)

    this is very altruistically written.i see real LOve in this poem.not the love itself.love for everyone.
    superb and marvelous. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 211 Points R.j. Wynn (7/8/2013 9:47:00 AM)

    I really love this one, so well said. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,101 Points Heather Wilkins (7/6/2013 10:35:00 PM)

    excellent writing. very positive. enjoyable read (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Annette Liliann (7/5/2013 6:10:00 PM)

    the passion of a disciples. lovely poem (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, June 24, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, September 24, 2013


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