Gloom and despair, dark agony-
Tis sad, so sad, but this we see,
In to much new age poetry.
The poems we write should touch, inspire,
Should fill the needs our hearts desire
And light our better natures fire.
We all should search and seek the light,
Not wallow in some woeful plight;
'Twold lighten up the darkest night.
From womb to tomb, for all the same
But, in between becomes our game
And if we fail, whom should we blame?
Hoping for more inspirational writing
And I might add Joe, write in a way we can understand and not in code. Great write.
Very good poem and the word pictures are superb. Liked that 'womb to tomb. Read mine - Cicatrix - Adeline
Sorry, half asleep (here is long past midnight) , clicked too soon before saying thank you for this wonderful write.
Gloom and despair, dark agony sometimes if we are lucky to change it into poetry painting music or any kind of beauty could be a greatest therapy, then yes would lighten up the darkest night.
TOTALLY agree with the content of this poem. So well written, So true. If we write poems that make people feel gloomy, what is the use?
Well I guess you won't be reading my latest. Gloom, Gloom, Doom. Great poem Joe, keep taking the high road.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Very inspired, keep it going. Good one.