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(16.02.1995 / Bhopal)

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My Smile Is Lost

How is the nest without egg,
How is the person without leg,
How is the flower without nectar,
How is the colony without sector..

A rain without water,
A father without daughter,
A dish without spice,
A game without dice..

Me without my smile,
Is like an unknown number to dial.
Me without my smile,
Is like everything above in a blank file..

My life has turned so pale,
Everyone takes my emotion for sale.
My fault that i had grown up in so much love,
Cared by my parent so much like a dove..

Its high time that my parents started getting irritated,
My life, my smile and my studies all are abated.
Who is responsible for my lost joy,
Everyone plays with my emotions as if i being a toy..

Please i beg of you,
Let me live my life like a newly dew.
I too have worries for my career and you,
I will make my life; give me a chance to brew....

Submitted: Friday, September 28, 2012
Edited: Saturday, September 29, 2012


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  • Kanav Justa (5/19/2013 9:00:00 AM)

    some of the lines were really very good, , , , in starting, , , the questions you have asked are quiet touching, , , nice imagination, , ,

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  • Jahan Zeb (10/27/2012 9:21:00 AM)

    I read you behind this poem. the poem is touching full of emotional lines.

    I liked the similes used.
    Me without my smile,
    Is like an unknown number to dial.
    Me without my smile,
    Is like everything above in a blank file..

    Nice poem

  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (10/3/2012 12:41:00 PM)

    Compelling and captivating! Well done my friend!

  • Yoonoos Peerbocus (9/28/2012 10:33:00 AM)

    the stanza structure /the theme/choice of vocab-all contribute to the beauty of the piece/nice

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