M. Asim Nehal

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My Poking Nose - Humorous And Satire - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Don't go on my innocent face
It may mislead you
But those who have seen it
Will never forget
What they went through
Not because it is my nose
But because my nose pokes in everybody's affairs
So beware and take care

I don't remember when it all first started
But yes ever since it started it never stopped
And there won't be any matter or person
Who would have escaped my nose
And something is there in my nose
That all matter get attracted towards it

Initially I felt awkward, but now I am habitual
And I really feel sorry for those who have
Had some experience of my poky nose

Those who are close to me are well aware
But for those who aren't first experience
Will be tough and uncomfortable
Are you thinking of Pinocchio's nose or
Amitabh Bachchan's nose no-no

One thing is for certain,
there is no matter
which has ever escaped my nose
It has magnetic power to attract any matter
And because of this I had many uninvited troubles
Following and chasing me.

Once I decided to get rid of it
But all my attempts went futile
And wherever I went, it attracted
Their problems and put me in trouble

Now I am leaving alone
At a very remote place
Keeping a safe distance from
All sorts of trouble
Hoping that this long nose
Will forget the art of poking.

Topic(s) of this poem: love and life, satire, life

Form: Free Verse


Comments about My Poking Nose - Humorous And Satire by M. Asim Nehal

  • (12/5/2015 11:40:00 AM)


    Amusing and fantastic poem Man........10 (Report) Reply

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  • Kelly Kurt (12/1/2015 2:40:00 PM)


    Funny, but with a touch of reality. I liked this very much (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal Mohammed Asim Nehal (12/4/2015 12:21:00 AM)

    Thank u so much Mr. Kelly.

  • (12/1/2015 2:15:00 AM)


    We all see such character around us who have habit of poking nose in everyone's affair, this poem is an alert for them not do do so else people will isolate them and they will be left alone. Such a brilliant poem with satire and humour both, Another surprise for me with this poem, You are a true poet with all round capabilities, God Bless You Asimji...beyond rating. (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal Mohammed Asim Nehal (12/4/2015 12:20:00 AM)

    Thank u so much TRE....

  • Rajnish Manga (12/1/2015 2:00:00 AM)


    Extremely wonderful. Enjoyed the humour and self-inflicted satire that has gone too far that 'Now I am leaving alone.... At a very remote place'. Great poetry. Thanks, Md. Asim ji. (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal Mohammed Asim Nehal (12/4/2015 12:20:00 AM)

    Thax much Rajnishji

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 1, 2015

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 6, 2016


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